Be With Me

Whisper my name
to wake me
Smile at me
in the dark
Breathe a prayer
before you sleep
Cry to God
when your heart aches
Laugh out loud
to clean the wound
Bleed out the poison
of countless arrows
Feel the sweet relief
of Heaven’s promise
Rant for lack
of other answers
Be
With
Me

Reviews

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

Soft and sharing with another soul... almost pleading in tone. I enjoyed reading what your subject was and how elegant you wrote it out. KS =)

[NotYourChinaDoll]

Good poem. I especially like line "Rant for lack of better answers". Thats a good way of putting it.

[Wildecat]

Great poem, thanks for sharing.