Pansy Secret

Pansy Secret

A Chapter by Wendy Seames Garner
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Pansy nodding head in summer breeze.

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Purple pansy faces

Summer breezes nodding heads

Thinking secret thoughts




© 2017 Wendy Seames Garner


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I like how you personify the Pansy but still keep an organic feel. It has the energy and natural nuances that really take into account what makes the soul of this flower. I can only imagine that it was an astute observer or a gardener who penned this poem--well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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You give the flowers life :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Wendy Seames Garner

7 Years Ago

Why thank you, Jolie!
The energy flows neatly and nicely. I really enjoyed this piece. Bravo.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wendy Seames Garner

8 Years Ago

Why thank y!
Actually, this is a haiku--now that I count the syllables...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wendy Seames Garner

8 Years Ago

This is one of those cases where what I thought I had written - wasn't. I have since changed it.
What a pretty image !

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pansy's are such pretty flowers. I like how it's made to seem seem like the flowers have a mind to their own, personifies that's the word I'm looking for. It's personified, and it makes me wonder what a flower would think. Wonderful haiku.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can almost see this pansy smiling. Very quaint...very clever.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I love simple statements like this. It reminds me of Sandburg (probably wrong person and spelling, sorry) when he talks about the fog walking as a cat. Your poem of three lines tells more than some of my short stories. Write on!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Very cute...simple yet speaks volumes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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so much beauty in so few words

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Lovely purple pansy prose.

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Wendy Seames Garner
Wendy Seames Garner

Lapeer, MI



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