piss and vinegar

I got a bug up my a*s

and a stomach full of gas

My throat all red and raw

Broken bottles on the floor

The stink and smell of death

fills my room with piss and doom

It burns my nose and rots my toes

This darkly gloom becomes my tomb

Where I go; only the devil knows

I’m a body wreak in this dead mans deck

With blood shot eyes and whiskey breath

I put a garden hose around my neck

 

I just hope I don’t get wet…

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[deeps]

I got a bug up my a*s
and a stomach full of gas
My throat all red and raw
Broken bottles on the floor

I love these lines here.
This is wonderful, funny write.