(85) Hello Beautiful

Always tell her you love her.

Stop crying my sweet
You burnt the dinner
And it has got you down
Come here for a hug
Listen to what I say

Hello Beautiful

Don't you worry now
That dress suits you well
Never mind about others
Of what they might think
Because in my eyes I say

Hello Beautiful

From that very first day
I still feel the same way
Every moment I see you
Every day I am with you
Every time we make love

I say...

Hello beautiful


copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

When ever I say hello beautiful she says, I'm not beautiful get your eyes checked. Whenever I say the dress looks great on you, she tells me how fat she thinks she is and holds her belly out and says "see". If I chose to say nothing then I am told that I don't think she is beautiful or sexy anymore. It is like trying to catch a kite in the middle of the storm that never remains still enough to be caught. Sometimes I want to give up a no win situation but she is too beautiful to give up on inside and out.

Great write.

[sarah]

this is so sweet and tender this is what love should be great write!

[Pollyanna]

Despite what some people think, everyone wants to know they are appreciated and loved. It doesn't take some grand display, just a simple phrase or action (hugs speak volumes). Simply beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wise words in the poem. The people in our life need to feel needed and appreciated. I like the desire and emotion of this complete poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[BlueberryKisses]

this is simply brilliant. Good write! :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was beautiful!!

[Lilly Negoi]

we often forget to tell those around us how we feel - and we shouldn't! wonderful point here Chris :).

[Shiningwolf]

Beautiful poem. Now if only I could have someone in my life like that, maybe I wouldn't feel so bad lol. I loved this poem very much soo...

[iamkim]

Oh gosh! This is so sweet of you Chris :) I'm now in love!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Pleasing Poetry ...!!! :)

[Jvl narasimharao]

Like your making love, this poem is really beautiful
yoursJVL