(85) Hello Beautiful

Always tell her you love her.

Stop crying my sweet
You burnt the dinner
And it has got you down
Come here for a hug
Listen to what I say

Hello Beautiful

Don't you worry now
That dress suits you well
Never mind about others
Of what they might think
Because in my eyes I say

Hello Beautiful

From that very first day
I still feel the same way
Every moment I see you
Every day I am with you
Every time we make love

I say...

Hello beautiful


copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

When ever I say hello beautiful she says, I'm not beautiful get your eyes checked. Whenever I say the dress looks great on you, she tells me how fat she thinks she is and holds her belly out and says "see". If I chose to say nothing then I am told that I don't think she is beautiful or sexy anymore. It is like trying to catch a kite in the middle of the storm that never remains still enough to be caught. Sometimes I want to give up a no win situation but she is too beautiful to give up on inside and out.

Great write.

[Hayley]

So sweet. All the precious moments when little things bring the woman down, all we need is a man to say "Hello Beautiful" :)
Very nice job!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I really like your poem Chris. It's incredibly touching and affectionate. Made me a little dewy-eyed,while reading it. It's also quite visionary. I see two people, getting older; having lived and loved together for many years. Their feelings of love and respect for one another are as loving and as affectionate as they were the day they met.
Sighhhh

[Erinne S.]

This is so sweet! I loved it and I agree with the review below... it would make a beautiful song :)

~Erinne

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is sweet. It would make a great song.
The intentions are pure and elegant.

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Very nice

[Hatchling]

Beautiful!!

[Fabric Pulse]

Sweet, the aroma of honeysuckle.

[Vanessa Rico]

Aww I truly love this poem, Chris! You are a master with words and create such sweet poetry! This is going into my library!

[emona]

i wish i could find a guy this sweet

[M.Babu]

Very beautiful my friend.

Sometimes people need reminders of their pros.

Well written:)