(85) Hello Beautiful

Always tell her you love her.

Stop crying my sweet
You burnt the dinner
And it has got you down
Come here for a hug
Listen to what I say

Hello Beautiful

Don't you worry now
That dress suits you well
Never mind about others
Of what they might think
Because in my eyes I say

Hello Beautiful

From that very first day
I still feel the same way
Every moment I see you
Every day I am with you
Every time we make love

I say...

Hello beautiful


copyright Chris Smith 2011

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

When ever I say hello beautiful she says, I'm not beautiful get your eyes checked. Whenever I say the dress looks great on you, she tells me how fat she thinks she is and holds her belly out and says "see". If I chose to say nothing then I am told that I don't think she is beautiful or sexy anymore. It is like trying to catch a kite in the middle of the storm that never remains still enough to be caught. Sometimes I want to give up a no win situation but she is too beautiful to give up on inside and out.

Great write.

[LA Lorena]

This is very sweet Chris, and made me smile. Women (and men too) don't need to have their errors pointed out to them, we know when we mess up. Loving acceptance goes a lot further than anything else.

[Katannaism]

This is so sweet and romantic-and very tranquil. It compliments very well and its just such a peaceful poetic piece.

[Emily B]

these are wonderful, romantic words . . . good write

[Sukriti Suki]

Oh this is so sweet...This is just true love! Wonderful.