Who am i...

Who am i...

A Poem by Jonathan Biswell
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Lately I've been wondering who I really am...

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Who am I…

 

 

 

Sometimes I wonder who I really am…at my house I feel like I need to be this little servant for my little brother and mother that they see me to be, watch what I say, make sure to listen to what they say… but when I am with my friends that feels like the real me the one who likes to have fun who rather be with his friends then be with his “masters” waiting for him at home

 

 

 

Sometimes I wonder who I really am…when I am around my family I have to be this little perfect son that my mom like to show off to the world to show she is the perfect mom but when I am with my friends I could be the biggest mess up in the world or I could have done something illegal I know they would still love me

 

 

 

I feel like I am two different people or maybe more…I want to find the true me I don’t want to be this little servant I want to be the person I know I am deep inside of me

 

 

 

Who am I really…

© 2013 Jonathan Biswell


Author's Note

Jonathan Biswell
My second poem I know I am bad at writing poem

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you are not bad at writing poem's, I thought it was very heartfelt, and I completely related... I think you are well on your way my friend. Good Job... :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jonathan Biswell

7 Years Ago

thanks ^.^
Lora King

7 Years Ago

not a problem... ;-)
Very nyc write. I also think like that sometimes. & to answer your question, you are both beccause you wont break rules with your friends if you didn't follow them at home & vice versa. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice poem with pertinent questions...Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jonathan Biswell

7 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welocme...:)..............
i wouldnt go that far...... its bad.... but not horrible?!.... LOLOL.... IM JUST messing with ya biswell! lolol.... whatever writing u have.. just put it out there if u think its worth putting out for others to read...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jonathan Biswell

8 Years Ago

this is the only place where I can vent this feeling so they wont get bottle up

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Jonathan Biswell
Jonathan Biswell

Shepherdville , KY



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