Micro Wings

another poetry pretending to be a prose in journal style...

Dear reader,

     My mind is always clouded with doubt. The storm never fades. The heart never weathered its leafy leaves. Little lights shines in darkness night. Choices were chosen on the unplanned flight. Do I mourn for these dead dreams or do I grief on this lonesome patchy seams. I over ponder on the path I never tame or just plainly lame. Hello welcome to my life, filled with rough Strife. This person think simple and most of the time overcomplicate things. I over eat meanings, makes me full and boring. Though I tend to forget as easy as one or two hours sleeping.

 

        Hey, hey, hey is this makes me want to stay. The highlights of my day will be a mind-numbing sway. Although it’s just a sad new beginning, in time I will fly. Having micro wings glides me to the ways of life. Never choosing, just going with the flow. Swimming into the blue and emerging with a stew. Someday this wing will grow, just enough for me to spread away to break free in this chained reality.

Sincerely your friendly neighbor,

W.Pax

Author's Note

I'm not sure if its too profound journal...
you judge...
a journal about me... if you want to know me... understand me...
this is me and my emotional issues...
thank you for reading...
~L~

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

lovely prose-poem, Pax! You create unique view by your carefully chosen words...I like the way your words reflect the fantasy world and reality in the same time! I can feel the micro wings, they will grow more and more every day and every time you go higher...and i love wings!
nour~

[Pax]

*smiling* i love wings too... we both love freedom my friend... hope we could fly together sometime.. :)
your great! thank you!

[Frieda P]

Overthinking is my middle name. I thoroughly enjoyed reading a piece of your psyche.

[Pax]

thank you for reading a piece of myself... I'm glad you enjoyed it...

[Sami Khalil]

Although it’s just a sad new beginning, in time I will fly. Having micro wings glides me to the ways of life. Never choosing, just going with the flow...
I just saw this one Mr. Pax . What a lovely write especially those lines...

[Pax]

thanks you so much dear friend... that line has a specail meaning to me... very near to my heart... much appreciate your thoughts about it....

[Sami Khalil]

It seems me and you love to fly... Lol

[Pax]

hehe... :D

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^

[Corset]

It is very hard I think for brilliant people to not over think things, over digest them, over experience them, but on the other hand how dull would our thoughts be if our heads would be empty, we would be resting on the rug with the family pet...but ..we ARE intellectual animals, our minds DO think ahead and sometimes life has to be given the opportunity to catch up :) xxx

[Pax]

thank you my friend... we ARE intellectual animals... i like that...
your words is amazing.

[Corset]

your words are...

[Pax]

I think you're certainly distinctive Pax, you accomplished a lot just to write it off. That is always good. Everyone is human, and everyone has issues, and it's we love to understand each and every feeling, it's only beautiful how we could learn... excellent piece, xoxo

E.L.

[Pax]

my thank you so much... yes, I accomplished a lot in this write, i want everyone to know more about me... I knew myself better now in this write...two main point that stuck to me: sometimes i complicates things and I always go on with the flow of life never choosing what's best, guessing just by instinct... do you remember the time when we talk about wings... i write it up here... so thank you...my dear friend.

Oh yes I remember, that was a good point, so great to read you always, hugs :)

[kublakhan27]

I know where you're coming from, and you articulate it wonderfully...nicely done.

[Pax]

thank you my friend... I'm glad you can relate to it... :)

[kublakhan27]

:)

[Marie]

A strange sort of poem, but nice...wings have to practice in order to grow...

[Pax]

oh... I'm kinda strange in my writes... lol.. :D
I'm always glad with your feedback Marie...read moreoh... I'm kinda strange in my writes... lol.. :D
I'm always glad with your feedback Marie...
that means a lot to me...
thank you...

[Lover Of Words]

great write... :) we always have something we over think....
Great peice
KB

[Pax]

thank you my friend...

[Baby Ricochet]

I story mr pax. Overthinking meaning will wear you down
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[Pax]

definitely my friend... that's why i sleep through it...to mainly forget... sometime it doesn't help but at least you've escape from it for A time being... :D thanks my friend....

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Much better. I'm like you, never chose my path, just go along with the ride. Thanks for sharing this.

[Pax]

there some errors in the system now... when i edit it... after i finished it produced a duplicate copy....I'll be deleting one of them later on...thanks for the suggestion