Senryu V

pillow dreams for two;

he steals into her wet dream,

at dawn- the lust thief

Reviews

[Michael X]

this smooth poem is sensuous, to want in dreams depicts an enchanting desire, the feeling is met with
the essence of emotional intention, as well, one can fully visualize the impact left on the heart by
the lover who takes hearts in the night, the lust thief, original idea which is refreshing in itself, this is a
short, powerful, well written piece, the imagery and mystique combine nicely, beautifully done.

[Leticia Bailey]

Very sensual and beautifully expressed. Much is revealed in very few words. I'm glad that I discovered your work and I look forward to reading more of it.

[M. Amphet Salt]

Simply beautiful with good imagery and sensory detail.