Touch you Touch me

Touch you Touch me

A Poem by wordman
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I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and we will be together forever

if only in our minds

 

Two souls meeting in the night

two wrongs don't make a right

but our hearts locked

and our souls entwined

 

We danced in the stars

solace we can find

so forever we shall always be

because i touched you

and you touched me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2017 wordman


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Such a breath-taking poem enhanced with Lionel's backgroud music !
The imagery and usage of metaphors is aptly balanced - there is a smooth flow right till the end of the verse.
Thank you for adding (more) stars in the twilight, wordman ! cheers

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

I guess i am a romantic it just comes out and I thank you for stopping by to read now you know wher.. read more
Blood Ink Diary

6 Years Ago

Ah, yes -- now I fathom your comment at my space ! Lol. stay blessed.
A amazing poem. You said it all in the short poem. We must give and take to make love work. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by you are always welcome Ron
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sorry its all I can say... maybe this too... no no other words can come.. breathtaking perhaps but thats it!! lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

you can tell I am a hopeless romantic thank you again
Im His Daughter

6 Years Ago

which is hard to find... You're wonderful!
 wordman

6 Years Ago

just another poet looking for that number one hit but I hope I am to humble to see it if it came
Just beautiful. A meeting of minds and souls. Now that's true love, deep and abiding.
Lovely writing Ron.
Spill ink and dance!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

you are too sweet thanks
When two souls become one, they can indeed find solace in each other's arms and minds. It sounds like you are doing all right and that makes me smile. Write on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading and your comment i am a good observer of life and
then I try to paint a.. read more

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Added on August 17, 2013
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 wordman
wordman

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