You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart

You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know

You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring

You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

[wordman]

you are a true detective my friend ,thanks

[Pryde Foltz]

A fantastic set of lyrics:)

[wordman]

thank you very much,good to see you here

[Chris Shaw]

Poetry that writes of love and pain. We put much of ourselves into our work. Others can be touched by that. Some can fall in love with words. I know that feeling. Nicely done Ron.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you for the visit chris

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a beautiful loving light that rises in your words. And words do create such worlds within us... even the distance of a memory.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Weeping willow]

Thoughts and words to describe love and pain, memories flutter by inside the words you speak ;-] nicely expressed.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[LazerRays]

Oh how very deep! Falling in love with a memory of you. One she created. I still always find myself smiling at your words here. You have a nice way with words. Very touching and passionate. You're talented ;) this was much enjoyed!!!!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Rye]

Beautiful, I really loved this one, Awesome song pick as well. I love chicago, I've seen them in concert quite a few times. This is a wonderful write.

[wordman]

thank you,this is one of my favorites,,this one almost like a song,and windows of your soul

[Rye]

i think my favorite one they did was 25 to 6 to 4. sometimes I have to jam that one.

[wordman]

well we are on the same page with music,love 70`s 80`s and some 90`s i think my fav is bee gees

[Rye]

Too Much Heaven...love that one. I enjoyed Barry Manilow and Neil Diamond. I really love country though. I like it all basically, but I have country in my roots

[wordman]

well i am a country boy but i only like a few,glen campbell was a good one

[Rye]

I miss him so much, I dedicated a write about 45 minutes ago to the fallen country artist.

[wordman]

yeah i liked glenn campbell

[Rye]

he had a lot of good music. I listen to country & Classic rock -n-roll and easy mellow stuff like Air supply, journey and Boston

[wordman]

yeap,same with me talk to u later got to go

[Rye]

have a great night

[emmajoy]

Looking back is sometimes wonderfully comforting, other times it hurts so much. Your words suggest you're nudging someone to share the memories you feel, feel their worth. Your words are sweetly laid but, I wonder, if the way they fall are - in fact, gently crying..

[wordman]

that`s the beauty of a poem,all comments are different,makes me wonder ej,thank you !

[Shannon]

Funny how I read things differently than others. I see a little longing and regret. As though the time has passed by before the love was discovered.

[wordman]

hat is a good point,thank you

[Tony Jordan]

writing with the heart is risky as we expose ourselves in the words but it's ultimately good for the soul. Your poem here is memorable and clear and I hope for you was good to get out. Good job.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit ! don`t know where the poem came from,maybe deep down somewhere

[Tony Jordan]

welcome Wordman

[barleygirl]

I had to go back a ways to find one of your poems that I had not yet reviewed. This one reminds me of a theme you've written about recently, too . . . the way it seems we fall in love with the memories we share in our writing. Maybe it's easier to share these heartfelt things becuz we're writing a poem, alone with the blank page . . . might be harder to share in person, face-to-face!?!?!? Anyhow your words describe something that happens quite a bit in our world of online communications (((HUGS))) Nicely crafted with sincere feelings.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,but the poem said he wrote it for her any way .