You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart

You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know

You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring

You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

[wordman]

you are a true detective my friend ,thanks

[willweb]

This was so very nicely penned. The theme is wonderful and you have managed to pull on those heartstrings with your words. Very cool.

[wordman]

i really appreciate your visit,thank you

[Fran Marie]

A lovely romantic poem..deeply expressed and beautifully penned..

[wordman]

thank you ror the visit

[wordman]

my key board is going bad sorry

[Fran Marie]

You're welcome...

[Gee]

Nice wordman,another fine romantic write

[wordman]

thank you ge for the visit

[Gee]

You're welcome

[ms. barrie]

Very beautiful, romantic longings that tugs on the heart.
I enjoyed the rhyming fluidity you've penned in this, very relatable
As well... thank you for sharing! :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[ms. barrie]

You're welcome, I look forward to reading more of your writes soon :)

[wordman]

I have a open door and my light is always on

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with Ana...damn, wordman, you shoot straight from the heart, no holes barred.

[wordman]

thanks Jacob, hell if your going to write make it beleivable

[Matching Socks]

That's so beautiful. Has a touch of sadness to it. No happy ending here but the love that is celebrated is very special. Very lovely.

[wordman]

thank you ana

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)

[Tiana]

Absolutely beautiful, Ron! Soft, tender and breathtaking ... I enjoyed your beautiful poem :)

[wordman]

and I enjoy your beautiful reviews,thank you

[Tiana]

Always a pleasure, Ron :)) Have a wonderful Sunday ...