Windows Of Your Soul

Windows Of Your Soul

A Poem by wordman
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I can look,

into your soul;

as i read,

the stories you hold.

 

Hold deep,

in your heart;

as you write,

your soul plays a part.

 

It reads,

like a movie script;

from long ago,

i love ,reading your soul.

 

You touch me,

in every word,

i feel the emotion,

coming from your heart

as your soul,plays it`s part...

© 2017 wordman


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I love this !!!

Its how I feel when I read the writings of others ...
We all have a story to tell and share with the world to those who are willing to take the time to listen or read of them..

I love this Wordman thank you for sending me this :')

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farmgirl

6 Years Ago

I still will never grow tired of reading it ..
 wordman

6 Years Ago

this was the last poem i wrote for writers cafe
thank you for reading
Farmgirl

6 Years Ago

=) well its beautiful...

Just let the words flow wordman Believe in yourself more.. .. read more



Reviews

I liked the simplicity. It wasn't verbose. It wasn't trying to reinvent anything. That was refreshing.

There are a few issues with grammar, but I'm not really one to talk. The bit about the movie script felt a little juvenile, out of place and forced against the honesty of the rest of the piece. Though, I appreciate a modern, more pointed reference that brings us to a contemporary context. Anne's Rants said it nicely, the meeting of two souls is appropriate here. I like the personal quality, like you're sharing something private. Nice!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
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willbradley

2 Years Ago

Of course!
Very touching and deep!

Good work :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
this is really touching.. and reflective.. I have spent a long time here just reading.. most of what I have here is what I brought with me from another site that is now defunct.. sometimes it is the comments that people make to others that has the most impact.. comes through the heart.. a gift from the soul..

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for the visit and welcome to w/c
olla

4 Years Ago

thank you.. I have actually been here for awhile.. I have just done a lot more reading than reviewin.. read more
 wordman

4 Years Ago

and i yours ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I love this gentle meeting of spirits.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for reading anne
We're each a biography, a series of stories, some withheld, some shared. When you can read the stories held back because you read what's not said, you have the essence of the person. You've captured that well here, sir.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

i thank you for the visit
i dedicate this poem to all the writers here on w/c

Posted 5 Years Ago


Poetry from "the soul" expressed and felt from "soul to mine". Profound and eloquently shared.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you very much
This is very deep and thoughtful, I enjoyed this. Good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
"Hold deep,

in your heart;

as you write,

your soul plays a part.



It reads,

like a movie script;"

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you sami
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

::::::)))))))))

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