Peaceful easy feeling

Peaceful easy feeling

A Poem by wordman

 



standing on a mountain top

looking out at the sea

i feel something inside of me

just a feeling i can`t explain

 

like a quiet hush

came over the sea

my spirit

trying to tell me

 

maybe a voice

from a distant land

maybe a forgot love

crying out my name

 

maybe a mystery 

from a past life

reaching out 

for my hand,,,


© 2021 wordman


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like a quiet hush
came over the sea
my spirit
trying to tell me

Love this part so much, so much can be said in silence,
amazing song to boot

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love this song and your write. So Beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ahh yes now I want to sing the
song of eagles and very much
enjoyed the serenity of this
lovely poem..definitly at ease
with a peaceful feeling

Beautifully penned

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you fran marie
This is exactly why I've lived alone in the wilderness for 10 years. There's no other feeling like it, being surrounded by the grandeur of nature & the outdoors, a feeling your poem brings to life in a deep feeling way. Mountains are so large & powerful, they make all the routine petty junk disappear (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Really beautifully expressed, as I have often felt drawn to the sea. Words paint a lovely picture ;-]

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Ah, this is lovely wordman. The scenery serene and inviting, the mood set and the mystery so in grasp yet delicately placed out of grasp :) Lovely poetry, stay well :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,
Such emotion in this piece. I love the calming feelings.
Nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
grab hold of that hand if you can Ron... life doesn't always give us those peaceful easy feelings... nice poem to go with that Eagles song.... as easy and peaceful as that sunset picture...

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you mr redzone
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Each line of this poem hit home....I do feel the same standing near a sea.I love water and its flow...it's like life.

Thank you so much for this beautiful poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank`s again
The quiet mind is a treasure trove in disguise.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thanks my friend,and that sounds right to me

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Added on September 12, 2021
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 wordman
wordman

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