Hotness

Hotness

A Poem by Aly

There's a fire burning deep inside of me.
Near you I can't seem to remember how to breathe.

You laugh
I smile
I felt a need to do more

Less than talking
More than staring
Please seduce me

Put your hands on me 

We're side by side 
Lock your lips on mine
Take another stolen heart beat

Temperatures rising 
Desire increasing
Lock your lips on mine
We don't have to say anything

Just seduce me

© 2013 Aly


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That's really awesome. Romantic, poetic, and erotic all at the same time. Nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this. Very very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. You're a great writer!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I haven't been on this site for awhile, and I feel like since I've come back to it your writing has matured a lot. This poem is great example (I'm not talking about the theme, but your language and literary techniques) Keep up the good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
nice work you did the theme very well

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Hey I have season 2 episode 1 up if you wanna read
Writer *78*

9 Years Ago

i suggest you give me the link so I would be able to follow it if you decide to switch.
Oh, so it's that kind of poem. *waggle eyebrows suggestively* Great job, nice phrasing, I love what you did with the theme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Prayer of divinity
Plea for completion
Height of yearning

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was great. Good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thank you
well, hotness's're nce here, liked here few hotness's...lol
Less than talking
More than staring
Please seduce me
Put your hands on me ...
i think this's an appropriate "HOTNESS", liked it, your word's are powerful.
lovely write pretty & this kinda hotness's're really very nice to read, i enjoyed it, well written, it's a nice piece to read pretty one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thank you much appreciated.
Another fine poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was rather enticing Aly...I'm so happy you didn't say 'another one about j' ;-) Like the title, 'hotness' says so much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thank you :)

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