I'll Never Let You Go

I'll Never Let You Go

A Poem by Aly

I’m always led back to you

A memory leads back so far. . .

A place

A time

When I was with you

But now the moments are gone . . .


You held me tight

I closed my eyes shut

I never thought I would want you so much

To say goodbye

When we started with hello


The last day I saw you

My heart sunk so low

All the strength you had given me

I gave it all back


You made me believe I was strong.

I didn’t know that loving you would only hurt myself

You loved me when I couldn’t love myself.


You’re presence so far way

But heavy all the way

No matter where I am

I’m always thinking of you


I go on living without you

Trying to remember life before you

Even though you’re not here.

It doesn’t feel that way.

I can’t seem to let you go.


You were more than a friend

You were the other half of me

But now you’re across the world

And I'm still wondering where I stand with you


I wonder where I stand

I stand

With you . . .



I’m always thinking of you

But now the memory is gone

© 2013 Aly


Author's Note

Aly
I know it's been awhile. It's suppose to be a song but it isn't all the way finished. So please help me fix my song. This was inspired with an experience(s) I've had and this was also inspired by Gravity by Sara Bareilles.

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i think this is going to be even more awesome when you finish it up :D great job, and welcome back :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aly

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much :)
I kinda read this as a poem, but now I can see it as a song. It's lovely! I linked this with something in my life, or I should say someone. It's excellent. I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aly

8 Years Ago

thank you!
Excellent beginning; this song looks to be nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aly

8 Years Ago

Michael! 'Bout time you reviewed! :D Thanks michael!
Whoa this is pretty deep. I know I don't always comment on your stuff, but this definitely requires some recognition. Awesome Job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aly

8 Years Ago

thank you. Means alot.
it's beautiful i love it. keep on writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aly

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for reviewing. Glad you liked it.
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

no problem
Beautiful. :) Definitely put this to music.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aly

8 Years Ago

thank you so much

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