Cold Obnoxious Wind (COLLAB WIth R.J.)

COLLAB

That cold obnoxious wind

is stirring ’round again.

Who knows why it does this?

It’s certainly not bliss.

It has knocked me off of my feet,

and made me feel quite incomplete.

Its aroma's rancidly bland …

no way it will ever be grand.

So, listen well to all I sincerely share;

then, join me in this deed, should you truly care.

If my hands were a rope, I'd give it a tug,

because this whole world needs a warm, caring hug.

A Writergurl~RJ Cowrite

© 24 Apr 2024

Author's Note

THANK YOU if you review....
Thank you Richard for you help with this write and for turning it into a Collab.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Nicely presented, WG 🌾

One of a few rare moments for me … I think we accomplished a rather exemplary result, If I say so myself. LOL!
I love the artwork you chose to compliment our work, and gratefully thank you for allowing me to take part in joining with you in adding my own wee key taps to your already existing inspirational theme, ideas, and verses for this uniquely special poem.

Thank you so very much, Lady-Poet, for the great enjoyment! ⁓ Richard🖌

[emmajoygreen]

Full of vigour. full of fine words laid with care. A collaboration that deserves contented applause!

[Writergurl]

Thank you for your review, I appreciate it

[Ana Papaya]

Beautiful seamless collaboration and I absolutely adore those last two lines. 💛⭐

[Writergurl]

Thank you for your review, I appreciate it

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome 🙂

[Amy R]

Another great collab poem with you both!
This poem, reflects on the harshness of this world but it shows we need kindness and empathy to keep moving forward.
It's Rhythm is flowing so nicely.
-Amy

[Writergurl]

thank you for your review

[Amy R]

You're welcome

[Stu. T.H.]

A lovely, tender and warm poem, like a hug. It sounds to me like a girl-meet-world moment, where the youths rise to the challenge imposed, reminding us that regardless of our fair share of misfortunes, it is ultimately humans who choose their destiny, not vice versa.
Thank you for sharing your collaboration work with me, author Writergurl and author R.J., it was a warm read.

[Writergurl]

Thank you for your review

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

This is a very lovely collaboration....