Island Girl

Remembering the island girl

Island Girl

Long dark hair

draped gently across

her soft silken shoulders.

Dark eyes

looking deeply into my eyes

with the sparkle of diamonds.

Ruby lips

soft and smooth,

I await my kiss.

Reviews

[B]

she sounds like she is an island
in character
and that is the most beautiful thing a woman can be

[Willard Wells]

Hopefully within this new idea and series I can maintain her character as you see her. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

[B]

That is beautiful
She is lucky :)

[Valentine]

Funny how old memories often pop up when we are in a writing mood. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Memories produce most writing for most of us. Thanks for stopping by.

[....................]

a beautiful observation while anticipating the kiss...great write, Willard

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for taking time to stop by and comment on my work. Greatly appreciated.

[....................]

my pleasure, Willard

[Perkele.7885]

Will, it sounds very much like you are talking about my wife.
It is a real good thing FOR YOU, FELLA that there are so many other island girls!
Anyway, Will, we both know that I am not the jealous type, don't we?

[Willard Wells]

This was a little of my girl and then a little poetic license. Island and Asian woman both seem to have the shy demeanor that I alluded to here.

[Perkele.7885]

You mean it wasn't my wife, Willard? Darn! I told her you mentioned her in a poem!

[Willard Wells]

Guess that put a little egg on your face then. I am sure you will recover by taking her out to a nice dinner and some dancing.

[Perkele.7885]

I knew that this was gonna end up costing me big time. lol

[Willard Wells]

I am sure it was not the first time and likely will not be the last. hahaha

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

She must be a beautiful soul!
An ode to her beauty and charm.
Especially loved the middle stanza.
Enjoyed the vivid imagery.

[Willard Wells]

Appreciate your stopping by to view my words and comment. Thanks,

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem and memory. Memory become sweeter with time. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Willard Wells]

I appreciate your visiting and commenting on my words.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem and you are welcome.