Shooting Star

Star Light, Star Bright

showering lights flash

across the night sky making

wishes on each one

hoping I will find the one

that grants my only true wish

you in my life forever

Reviews

[Valentine]

This is truly lovely. Hope you get your wish. Valentine

[Willard Wells]

Well, I had my wish before and seems to have happened. thanks again and I owe you lots of reading.

[emmajoy]

There's a longing in this, and a hope for what you feel is present. Guess the feeling i have after reading this poem twice is. that you already know a beautiful outcome. There's a certainty here not a question!

Short this might be but very sweet.

[Willard Wells]

You are correct, she is in my life. But want her there forever more. Thanks for the visit and comments.

[Mercy Fae]

This is short, but very deep. You write wonderfully, as usual.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words and visiting.

[Ana Papaya]

Very romantic. :)
Eternal love. A very lovely poem Willard!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for you visit and kind words.

[θεά]

This is such a quaint little hextet. It would have no problem fitting in as lines of a love card. I love the use of the star in this, even though oft used, your employment has been charming. Breezy read.

Look forward to your other works,
Best M.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts. Glad you enjoyed my piece of fluff on love. If you do partake of more, you may find some with a bit more edge. Peace be with you, my friend.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're shooting star for the wish of moon isn't it? Amazing lines!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much. As I sit in the evening thankful for my love, the words came. Appreciate the visit. And so quick. haha

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes sometimes you need to be as fast as light lol. And your always welcome my dear friend :)