bad memory

With eyes deep in thought

love is what you sought

reality is lost from your mind

a will is what you cease to find

With eyes deep in thought 

with a love is who you fought

now those memories haunt you

and there's not a thing you can do

lonely is now what you are

and love is for what you've reached so far

you've destroyed your one and only chance

at anything such as romance

Author's Note

I wrote this really quick and didn't really take much time to think about it. :)

Reviews

[AreWeBothCrazy]

nicely done for on the fly!

[momo]

interesting write especially considering you didn't think of it!

[Dark Empress]

Poems that you don't think much about are usually the best ones. Great write. i really enjoyed it.

[Bard Constantine]

The best poems often come out that way... Nice job...

[Tony]

"eyes deep in thought"-- the eyes are very inspiring arn't they. They can tell so much without saying a thing. I've counted the lines and you may consider breaking this into quatrains-- it would work perfectly. Nice work all around.

Makosica

[ice]

Note:
You have picked a good topic, and you have done well with it.
If you puctuate, the flow would be easier for people to read, especially non poets. I would love to see this poem written in sonnet form, or perhaps a villanelle..anyway, I liked the message
ice

[SilentDreamer]

This is pretty great. It flows so perfectly and rhymes just right while still making sense. Awesome job.