bad memory

bad memory

A Poem by xNote_to_selfx

With eyes deep in thought
love is what you sought
reality is lost from your mind
a will is what you cease to find
With eyes deep in thought 
with a love is who you fought
now those memories haunt you
and there's not a thing you can do
lonely is now what you are
and love is for what you've reached so far
you've destroyed your one and only chance
at anything such as romance

© 2011 xNote_to_selfx


Author's Note

xNote_to_selfx
I wrote this really quick and didn't really take much time to think about it. :)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

nicely done for on the fly!

Posted 13 Years Ago


interesting write especially considering you didn't think of it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Poems that you don't think much about are usually the best ones. Great write. i really enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The best poems often come out that way... Nice job...

Posted 13 Years Ago


"eyes deep in thought"-- the eyes are very inspiring arn't they. They can tell so much without saying a thing. I've counted the lines and you may consider breaking this into quatrains-- it would work perfectly. Nice work all around.

Makosica

Posted 13 Years Ago


Note:
You have picked a good topic, and you have done well with it.
If you puctuate, the flow would be easier for people to read, especially non poets. I would love to see this poem written in sonnet form, or perhaps a villanelle..anyway, I liked the message
ice

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is pretty great. It flows so perfectly and rhymes just right while still making sense. Awesome job.

Posted 13 Years Ago



2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

446 Views
17 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 10, 2010
Last Updated on October 24, 2011

Author

xNote_to_selfx
xNote_to_selfx

MO



About
Hi my name is Jade. I am 17 years young. My hobbies include writing (obviously), reading and playing bass guitar. One of the authors I look up to is Anne Rice, she is an amazing writer and I aspire to.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..