Left Alone

Left Alone

A Poem by victoria

Are you looking for me?
Im the one standing alone.
of course.
If you ask my why, ill say i prefer to be alone,
to think, always thinking...
But thats not entirely true.
Though i dont want to talk to just anyone,
i wish that someone special would come talk to me,
that you would come talk to me.
tell me a joke, and make me laugh.
Let me look into your amazing eyes,
make my stomach do flips.
But you never come....
instead your standing with her,
talking to her,
making her laugh....
And so i get what i want, im left alone,
to think.
to think about you wrapping your arms around her and telling her you love her,
thinking about how i wish that was me....
and so, im left alone, left to feel my heart break.

© 2010 victoria


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I wouldn't say that this is my favourite piece of yours, but I think that this is written pretty well. I could relate to this poem, and I thought that you chose the right words and sentiments to portray the feeling of having to stand back and watch the person you love, love someone else.
~PaperHearts

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's not easy standing back and watching the one you like with someone else. You're emotions are expressed well throughout the poem and is something many can relate to. A great piece. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, amazing poem. Love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'm glad you chose not to use a rhyming style for this poem, its a lot more powerful in this form. sad words that many can relate to, great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Ian
Aww this poem was sad beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i teared up.
Amazing :)
Both because its well written and i know exactly how it feels.
Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


pretty well written, easy to understand the picture your going for, easy to uncover the emotions in it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this poem, vivid emotion and all in all very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wonderful I thought. Deep stirring emotions of
envious longing (been there, felt that). Makes one hope
a wish could come true; or the one whom is longing finds
someone that will make the other feel that longing in return!
A little "two can play that" kinda thing but in a nice way! lol


Posted 10 Years Ago


nice,
really felt you described this well!

overall, written fairly well with the exclusions of some spelling errors...to be honest, the beginning didn't draw me in--so maybe some editing ?? not bad though, last line made me frown (and i hate frowning!! ) lol
good job

Posted 10 Years Ago



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