I Wish

i wish that just once when i told you i was ok, youd tell me to tell the truth.

i wish you could see the pain in my eyes,
i wish i could let out my silent cries.
im breaking down, so deep inside,
just once i want to see the light.

i wish that you would see my tears,
i want to get rid of all these fears.
just say you love me, so sweet my dear,
just hold me tight, dont think im wierd.

i need your hugs to take away the pain,
i need these drugs to keep me sane,
my tears still fall, matching the rain,
i wish i could fall, and break this chain.

i wish that just once when i told you i was ok, youd ask me whats wrong.

Reviews

[mystic soul]

every word in this poem well describes the pain of loosing someone you truly love.... great write!

[A]

I really like this piece. Seems like it could be a song. I love how everything flows and the emotion in it. Great poem :)