My Love...

The next poem I wrote in this series...

 

 

My Love…

 

 

I’ve known you for months,
But it seems like years,
And you know me better,
Than most people ever will.

I feel like the world is spinning,
And will never stop,
But when I talk to you,
All is calm.

When I’m talking to you,
My eyes begin to twinkle
My heart skips a beat,
And whatever is wrong,
Goes right.

When I see your name,
I can’t help but smile,
When I think about you,
There’s nothing else
In the world.

We may live far away,
But that doesn’t change
My feelings,
And It’s great to know,
You feel the same.

You’re probably the
Greatest guy
I’ll ever meet,
And probably the
Greatest guy I’ll ever
Fall this hard for.

I just hope,
That I won’t get hurt,
Because I don’t think
I could take that
My love,
I don’t think
I could handle
Losing you,
Because
I love you….

 

 

 

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

oh beautiful just simply beautiful, every verse, i love the lyrical rawness of this. your words just pierces right through the heart. wow. never doubt your immense talent for writing, ever or i will want to shoot rubber bands in your face at you!

here we go:

I just hope,
That I won’t get hurt,
Because I don’t think
I could take that
My love,
I don’t think
I could handle
Losing you,
Because
I love you….

-- just saying :) -- gorgeous!

[}Echo{]

Thanks so so much!! O.o.. Ouch... SEe I TOLD YOU YOU WERE VIOLENT!!

[ms. barrie]

lol not much :)

[ms. barrie]

..you welcome, hold on to that piece. re read it, esp. the last verse :)

[}Echo{]

Yes, you are! T-T

Thanks. :))

[ms. barrie]

wait, you will see, adn you welcome (and) ;)

[}Echo{]

Yeah.. :)