Longing To

Longing To

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

I'm screaming my heart out

Yet you can't see

 

The pain that you left

Lives deep inside me

 

I drown all my sorrows

Inside a bottle

 

Don't care what life

Brings me tomorrow

 

If life's a sweet melody

Mine has gone bitter

 

I'm longing to see you

Attend to your Ritter

 

At night I search for you

With my shining armor

 

Enchanted I'll wait

Defending your honor

 

In part I'm tormented

By the pain I inflict

 

My futures demented

And hard to predict

 

The spell has been cast

Which only you are to break

 

My love's everlasting

For no one can take!

 

 

Reviews

[T. L. O'Neal]

A love gone bad is a painful malady but you expressed it well. Good read. T

[PoemRodent]

I could feel the emotions and flow this is a good write. However as humans in this world love without pain would be meaningless. One would not know the other... So all has it place. Good write!!

Dostani

[Spoken]

This was an enjoyable piece. The longing, "love is a spell".. how true. A great view of love.

If life's a sweet melody
Mine has gone bitter

My fav. line. This has a great flow, everything fits really well together. A biter sweet write!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Spell has been cast.. someone put a spell on you ,, you care for them more than they you so it seems to read to me ,, this is haunting , sad but beautiful too.

Chloe
xoxo