Tribal Dance

 

 

The lady in blue

My tribal woman

It is a dance

She twists

She turns

She looks at me

From the side

Her eyes

Colour emerald

Her hair

Painted blue

Mixed in

Black

My tribal woman

She wears her blue dress

Slowly she turns

And reveals her back side

Slowly it slides down

Her body so smooth

Hot

My tribal woman

She teases me

She smiles

Let’s it slide more

She is almost naked

I see only her back

It’s enough to make me shiver in delight

My tribal woman

Her green eyes say touch me

Hold me

Take me

I’m yours

She reveals to me

A symbol on her shoulder

A marker

A tribal dance

A tribal moment

My tribal woman

Her curves

Makes me tremor

She moves closer to me

Caresses my face

My tribal woman

With one finger

It glides down my chest

A gentle touch

She has me

Take me

I’m yours

My tribal woman

She teases

She smiles

Flashes those

Bright greens

They say

I’m here

Take me

Have me

I’m yours

My tribal woman

I quake

I let out a moan

The moment

Was too much

Too hot

To sensual

She had me

Took me

My tribal woman

She glides across the room

She smiles

She dances

She teases

Her hair

Smells so good

Her body so soft

Her touch

My tribal woman

Stole a moment

It was a dance

A tribal dance

The lady in blue

Owns my heart

It was a tribal moment

My tribal woman

The lady in blue

Author's Note

I had to change it from mature to everyone, so I can share it without people having to sign up. :)

Reviews

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Such a powerful write here, I like this I found it very beautifull. Lovely writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Create a beautiful image and allow the reader to fall into a moment where a woman can steal our vision and teach us to appreciate what is important. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This is fast paced as it should be. It makes you feel like it is in rhythm of the heart beating quickly with excitement. This is sensual and energetic. It is creative and thrilling.

[Larry Dyson]

yes...blue like the ocean blue the river blue the sky blue ..of NAture and women who know the nature of Life..wonderful Brother Bear.

[Dayran]

You could almost hear the 'tum, tum' of the drums. Is the lady in blue, the sky?

[Lily Mae]

I love this.. nothing like a Tribal woman in blue...a lady love..x

[Morning Star]

What a beautiful enticing colorful of passion
beautiful vividness and images excellent flow
Brilliant write!

[Jean Alexandria Randall]

What a truly beautiful exotically descriptive poem. You could just picture the scene perfectly.

[Revolutionary]

Beatiful dance you described.Coriography in words