Encounter

In collaboration with Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

Encounter Tell me of things you wouldn't say and tickle my ears with sin. Do let me travel... a new oasis within your soul, I'd like to sail on your skin. I beg of your trust. And as you part the oceanic waves with a blanket of silver lust, I will remain. Let me reach the depths of your heart; hidden there for so long, I shall swim. My imagination, a burden on my shoulders; grasp me firmly by the hand, I crave your touch. And as you surrender in my arms, with not even a single doubt, I will stay... Oh, my darling!  What dangerous game we play...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

If you won't be offended, I find this collaboration to exceed some of your solo efforts, for both of you. It's like there's a chemistry between you that elevates the both of you in this message. There's a palpable lure of fun & danger nicely combined. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Doesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're right re the chemistry. There indeed was at the time this piece was written. .. Thank you so much for appreciating, BG. Glad you like it (:

[Stacy Purvis]

"Danger is my middle name..." ha ha!!! Love this. It's so cute and romantic!
Thank you for sharing!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Anastasia Danger Purvis! 😛 I'm really glad you liked this collab! Means a lot 😊😊

[Poeticme]

Dangerous is right!!..But beautifully​ written, hats off to all you guys....There's nothing wrong with living on the edge Yumna😋...Great piece my friend....Once again I smile

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True.. I agree! Living on the edge is my fav thing sometimes 😉😂
Thank you, Dennis! I'm glad this made you smile. Really means a lot to me 😊😊

[Tina H.W.]

Very very sensual and dangerously exciting! A love poem with an edge... Also love the usage of colours in there with blues and violets being the sensual verses and red with "Oh my darling, what dangerous games we play..." as the climax. I enjoyed this very much!
Beautiful! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The colours are more because to discriminate the parts we wrote. Blue being his, and purple mine. But yeah they do add to the sensual touch..
Thank you, Tina! I'm glad you liked this one. Means a lot 😊😊

[Tina H.W.]

I guess we all interpret things differently. But I totally see what you mean. Either way, I loved it :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're too sweet 😉😊 💜

[Tina H.W.]

Puhaha yah...sure... ;)

[Kesha]

This was absolutely beautiful, you're right, this one is much deeper my friend ;) I loved how your words flowed perfectly together as if you were one. Nicely done, pure perfection :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, the deeper one is yet to come, Kesha 😉
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this one 😊😊

[Kesha]

Even more meaningful than this? Whoop Whoop! I'm excited 😁😁 you're welcome! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah probably lol.. It won't be romance though 😉😉

[Kesha]

Haha okay 😂

[Tony Jordan]

A true collaboration.
I can't sense anything but mutual respect or the other's words here.
Beautifully playful and sweet.
The twist at the end - superb.
Well done you both!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well, yes. We didn't edit a single word of the other. It's just like it was started 😊
read moreWell, yes. We didn't edit a single word of the other. It's just like it was started 😊

Thank you so much for appreciating, Tony! Means a lot 😊

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Tony! I'm still waiting for our shelved collab. Thanks for reading this

[Tony Jordan]

Ah Sir Drift, like a fine wine our collab will only get better when it comes to fruition my friend. You're very welcome both. :))

[Surya]

Yumna you are improving by day, learning new outcomes and their imlementation...
"Oh my darling!
What dangerous game we play..."....a good end for your description... I honestly liked it.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Yes she really did a good job. When we wrote no changes were made. This is the original outcome from the get go.

[Surya]

Ohh, great then, both done a job turned to great indeed..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Surya! The ending words are by Sir Drift 😊😉
I'm glad you liked it 😊

[Surya]

It was my pleaure Yumna..:)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh how beautiful it sounds. I'm glad to have expressed with such a beauty like you. I shall look forward in writing more with you, but I shall be excited more to just talk to such a beaut. 😉

[Dr. YumnaKay]

lol poetry is a form of talking, Sire ;)
It was nice working with you. I look forward to writing more with you too :)

[Jes' Pi]

FIIIIRSSSSSSSSSTTTTT REVIEEEEWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

This is such a good poem! Very enjoyable! Nice collaboration!

-Miss Banana

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hahaha thank you, princess! I'm glad you like it :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you for reading dear 😊