Encounter

In collaboration with Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

Encounter Tell me of things you wouldn't say and tickle my ears with sin. Do let me travel... a new oasis within your soul, I'd like to sail on your skin. I beg of your trust. And as you part the oceanic waves with a blanket of silver lust, I will remain. Let me reach the depths of your heart; hidden there for so long, I shall swim. My imagination, a burden on my shoulders; grasp me firmly by the hand, I crave your touch. And as you surrender in my arms, with not even a single doubt, I will stay... Oh, my darling!  What dangerous game we play...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

If you won't be offended, I find this collaboration to exceed some of your solo efforts, for both of you. It's like there's a chemistry between you that elevates the both of you in this message. There's a palpable lure of fun & danger nicely combined. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Doesn't offend me a bit, in fact, makes me smile :) That's a lovely observation and perhaps you're right re the chemistry. There indeed was at the time this piece was written. .. Thank you so much for appreciating, BG. Glad you like it (:

[Abhishek Asthana]

it took me awhile to understand the aura of the poem... really it was the stunning one...end was beautiful... keep writing !!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this collab. I'm glad you liked it :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

you are welcome.. awesome piece it was !!

[Jessica Lima]

"Tell me of things you wouldn't say;
and tickle my ears with sin." - The imagery is so vivid it gave me Goosebumps!! Its's like I can feel the warm breath upon my on skin!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well, I'm glad you felt the intensity of the words here. Thank you for appreciating this collaborative effort 😊

[Cobblestone Traveler]

So beautiful!! I love the passion and indulgence you have portrayed. My favorite line is "and tickle my ears with sin".
Delicious devilry! ;) Enjoyed the read.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked this collaborative effort. Means a lot to me :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Excellent. Exciting and urgent with sensuality and poise and class.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for the appreciation. Glad you liked this collab 😊

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

I really like this, YunnaKay. Some favorite lines: "...and tickle my esrs with sin...", "As you are part of the ocean waves...", "...my imagination...

Well done!

Lori

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this collaboration, Lori. Glad you liked it 😊

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

Very welcome, YunnaKay!

[Island Hippy]

A passion filled write, well done.

The image reminded me of home. Izzy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it😊

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[Shabeeh Haider]

To swim and reach for the heart is a wondrous experience.
Love is indeed a very dangerous game.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It is indeed. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here, Shabeeh. I appreciate it :)

[JayDee]

Interesting write guys.
I like it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, JayDee! Glad you liked it. Good to see you around :)

[emmajoy]

What an exciting and interesting collaboration. Not sure of the colours ^, perhaps they jolt a little.. but the sentiments are most certainly - warming. Writing about passion so often brings out the very best of thoughts and their underlying imagination/ The use of first person third line somehow cements a fragile devotion.

* Can always add a postscript before or after ..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The colours here were used to show the sentiments as well as mine and his favourite colour. His being blue, and mine purple. The red colour in the last showing the twist here 😉
Thank you for liking this collaborative effort, Emma. Glad you like it 😊

[emmajoy]

I realised that but...

Was/is a very lovely collaboration..