Arose Within The Ashes Of Mine.

I may have felt love

I may have felt sadness

I may have felt the emptiness,

The loneliness and the longing.

 

 

I am no longer the broken hearted

I am no longer a Fallen

I grew to be A Risen Heroine

The one I wished to be for so long.

 

 

My inside was on fire

Turned to ash

Yet I arose as a phoenix

I arose from my ashes;

Within the orange and red flames

I moved on.

 

 

Never felt the strength

Wander from vein to vein

Kept believing in those lies;

Those lies I've lived on for so long.

 

 

I kept giving in to you

I kept living beneath

The blanket of your beautiful lies.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the third stanza.

[Allycat]

amazing write :) I can relate to this, It's wonderful to finally move on from something that has hurt you for so long.
"My inside was on fire
Turned to ash
Yet I arose as a phoenix
I arose from my ashes;
Within the orange and red flames
I moved on."
Beautiful Job :D

[White_lily]

A really great write :)

[Winter]

Sometimes we chose to see with the blind eye for the one we love. Its understandable. I love this writing. Thankyou.

[Melobldnfr]

Agreed. I particularly like, and can relate to, the last lines "I kept giving in to you / I kept living beneath / The blanket of your beautiful lies." I certainly feel you. Thanks for sharing.

[Balls:)]

I really really liked it.
Beautiful... I feel like i really connected with you

[Tasha]

Lovely transformation.

[Allison]

This is lovely. I love how you transformed from a "Fallen Heroine" to a "Rising Heroine." Great job

[Jeremy Baker]

I like this assertiveness and vulnerability at the same time. Very well written.

[angelink]

The tale of a RISEN heroine. A story of a rebirth, strong and beautiful.