I tried

trying sometimes presents you a place where everything is just seems like a miracle:)

I tried and tried and tried again
but its not working out

Its hard but I am trying..
giving everything I have..
still haven't found the right path..

I am trying to get close to it
but still far behind

Sometimes I get under it
grab it with my both arms
still far behind

It's getting worse the more I try

I am trying to sort it out
just the idea to do it remains laggard

One thought popped out from my mind
"I will try again tomorrow"

I try to push more
To give a last try

At last I succeeded 
feeling a big relief

Sometimes trying a lot
gives you a Success
its all the patience that counts at last

Author's Note

Try to enjoy this poem..please review this honestly..
and rate it too..i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Bertie]

A simple poem with a painfully clear message.
I wonder if perhaps it's slightly repetitious...I understand that that feeds into the theme of trying again and again and again...I'd love to see you express this in a different form, more concise and limiting to see how you do; you're easily a good enough writer to do it. Maybe try taking the theme of the poem and putting it into the form of a haiku or a cinquain :)
But I reiterate, a nice poem

[alegria]

simple poem..could feel d pain of effort shown by d poem..:)nice

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good work...simple...!!!!

[Priyanka Natesh]

Great one.. Minor typos but that's alright. Good job. Thank you :)

[Richard Williams]

Better to try and fail than not try at all. An old bromide yet always apropos. And patience is indeed important.

[melissa]

I relate to this poem because I been there done that

[sarah]

You should always keep trying if it's really really something you believe you want and need a really strong write!

[Calypso]

Don't we all.
I'm sorry for you.

[Daft Jester]

There were two I's that needed capitolisation. Other than that, it was good. It reminds me of that famous quote from Yoda. "Do or do not. There is no try."

[Kenneth The Poet]

Dead on accurate.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh...wow. I can totally relate to this poem! It hits me at the heart! Love this poem! It gives such a well-powerful message. Its inspiring and encouraging! Made my night! ^o^ Such a joy to read. Thanks for writing. Beautiful write!