Days of Future's Past (Haiku)

Tomorrow’s sunshine

just for fun and just because;

I missed it today.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

perhaps knowing that there will be sunshine tomorrow, we take that for granted. we lose ourselves in our own adventures and passions in the moment, which is today, and don't think about tomorrow's sunshine because we are absorbed in today's sunshine. it is a thought-provoking and contemplative piece. excellent job.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very lovely and sweetly said :) yes, i missed it today! not for fun, but Sun is so much important for my life! thank you for beautiful photo and poem !

[Becky C Strukamp]

Sometimes its just the right thing to do...the right words...the right mood....the right day ...just because...wonderful writing Allen.

[Sarah]

loved it!

[MOON]

Beautiful words and the picture is stunning.

[Jamillet]

O.O that has to be the most beautiful sunshine i've ever seen! pssssh who cares about the those three lines spoke to me! :3

[Relic]

You've brought out what I subconsciously think in my head every warm summer's day. A wonderful Haiku.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice. Pretty. I do enjoy this a lot as well as the picture.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Yes. An inspiration to catch some sun today, while it's peeking!

Very nice, Allen. I enjoyed it greatly.

[EMF]

Absolutley wonderful. A true heart lifter Allan. As we used to say... 'Proper Job' mate.