Stop

Stop

A Poem by Avia

Adrenaline, pumping.
Emotions, flying.
Madness, sewing itself into the cloth of my mind.
Feelings, forever changing.

"Take a moment, just breathe."
I can do this, just need a moment.

© 2017 Avia



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I feel only one emotion stays constant i.e the emotion of heartbreak, sadness and despair.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avia

5 Days Ago

I think we have a mixture of many emotions, but the ones you mentioned are usually more intense than.. read more
Najam Us Saher

5 Days Ago

You are most welcome ☺
fantastic! well done!
... "Take a moment, just breathe."

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avia

5 Days Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
WOW! Such a beautiful composition :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Avia

1 Week Ago

Thanks Amrita.
well...that was great poem....and i think i'm gonna use it to calm myself down during anxiety attacks.......well portrayed.....

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Avia

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much. I'm glad i could help. I once read somewhere that when life is dragging you in .. read more
anonymous_at

1 Week Ago

Well that will certainly help me.... :)
Oh, that mad moment of anxiety causing havoc! And you are quite right, 'take a moment, just breathe'. It has an amazing effect! I really like this poem. The first verse makes us feel quite frantic. Then the change in tempo of the last two lines, has a rally soothing effect. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Avia

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad it had such an effect, I was trying to tell myself to stop for a moment... read more

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