Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Breathe

A Poem by Coyote Poetry



You are my joy. You are everything and everything is you.

You undressed with the lights on.
I watched you slowly take away LAYERS of clothing.
I can feel your smiling face and  you know you have took my breath away
with your beauty and your kindness.



You stand and you are facing the mirror.
Standing nude erasing the make-up from your face and you asked me.
Am I still beautiful? Do I make your sedate life become alive in the night?

I  went to you and  and I embrace you tightly and I whispered.


You are my everything. My first thought in the morning and last thought in the night. You know I want to caress your sun-kissed skin and perfect body now.
I will wait. I know when you are fasting in the want and need. The need expands.

She turned and her eyes filled with wisps and notions.
She asked me. Am I a wicked woman? I want us to be wild
and free like children. I want you and I to yearn for the long nights and embrace.
Do I want too much?


I told her the gods are kind to us. They allowed you to come into my life.
You give me  hope and reason to be alive.

She came to me. Fell to her knees and embraced my waist.
She looked up.


I told her. You take my breathe away and you are so beautiful.

                                      Coyote/John Castellenas


© 2017 Coyote Poetry



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Coyote Poetry
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whew! hot and romantic ..growing older together never means the fire is dim; nor the beauty gone ;) you skirt the edge of erotic and leave enough room for the readers imagination ..which is most likely wilder than you, the author, imagine ;) thanks for sharing Coyote Man
E.

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Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you my friend for reading. I appreciate the comment.



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whew! hot and romantic ..growing older together never means the fire is dim; nor the beauty gone ;) you skirt the edge of erotic and leave enough room for the readers imagination ..which is most likely wilder than you, the author, imagine ;) thanks for sharing Coyote Man
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you my friend for reading. I appreciate the comment.
I say yes to more love like this.. a beautiful write Coyote..xo

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you Tracey. I appreciate the comment.
this is so sweet.. so tender.. it took MY breath away..

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.
This is a beautiful tribute to beautiful women. There is much innocence in this poetry. I love the collaboration here; it was a success. Beautiful imagery and admiration! Love it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Vria P Crow

3 Months Ago

And thank you always for sharing. :D Innocence is something we should all try to pursue. It is oka.. read more
Very gentle way of make love. Like feathers on sky. Beautiful and joy to the read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you dear Poet. We need moments of kindness, concern and love near daily.
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3 Months Ago

Yes without them we are nothing .
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I agree my friend.
Yes indeed, this is a rather special write, sensual & with a real feel about it. Lovely words for someone very special methinks.....

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Thank you Neville. Once, a special person.
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Must have surely been.......
what an expression of love written in the ink of sensuality.
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Thank you Jacob. I appreciate the kind words.
I like when I read a piece with a deep personal touch, like here, the writer speaks about himself, but he also reaches into those parts inside us.

One of the greatest fear for a woman as she grows old that her beauty will fade in her man's eyes, like men, we have this fear too, keep these assured arms wide, keep these assured words flow, some of Your words settled inside me because I wrote about such thoughts, one may see them normal, but they do have deep meanings.

Thank You for sharing a piece of You with the rest of us.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
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Thats deep sensual meaning.............

Keep the good work....

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
I started imagining!

Oh! Soooo Lovely coyote
beautiful words
Beautiful Poetry :)
keep writing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Thank you dear Pragati. I appreciate the comment.
Pragati Chaudhary

4 Months Ago

:)

Keep goin!

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