Humor Me

Humor Me

 

Humor me

Tell me how you’re

Better off without me

Make me laugh

Tell me how much

You don’t miss me

Make me smile

Tell me you could

Do so much better

Make me chuckle

Tell me how you’re

Happier without me

Make me laugh

Make me smile

Make me chuckle

I know you’re lying

It’s written all over

Your damn face

Your smile never quite

Reaches those sad sad eyes

You’re caught in a lie

I caught you

You lose

Tag

You’re it

Amuse me

Entertain me

Humor me

Boy just humor me

I always love to hear

New jokes

So tell me this joke

Raconte moi cette blague

Let me hear it

Humor me

Oh

Just humor me

Reviews

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Lol! I love this, I bet it was fun to write! :D Great work!

[Crazy Cat Man]

LOL i love this and "f**k this persom" haha........let them wallow in their own pain. Ugh. a humorous way of throwing back at 'that' person's face. LOL

[That_Girl]

Hmmm don't you just love it when you can see right through someone's BS? Great poem, as always! :)

[That_Guy]

Coming from a rather Cocky guy, I enjoyed this lol

[Destinyxi]

I told you you were cocky :P

[That_Guy]

pfft yeah but you said it like it's a bad thing ;)

[John Stussy]

Well-written poem. Again haha. It's rather pathetic actually, seeing someone claiming to be happy when they're quite obviously not. Of course, who better to see through that flimsy smile of a mask than one who hides behind them all the time? Then again, when you really get to know someone and someone gets to really know you, it's hard as all hell to lie.

[Laura Maidah]

Enjambment really works in your favor here. Well done! Everything is very purposed.

[Monica]

Great job! It's well written with your usual easy flow of words and emotions.
You deliver honesty in your poems that make it easy for others to understand and relate to.

"I know you’re lying
It’s written all over
Your damn face
Your smile never quite
Reaches those sad sad eyes
You’re caught in a lie"

...once a liar...always a liar. I have a personal attachment to honesty and little respect for those who do not. Good for you, for standing up for yourself. Stay strong and you will be fine.
Keep writing :)

[GunMetal]

I think I've been that guy in this poem. Not malevolently. I didn't have the nerve to say it. Fear of hurting them. Though, it wasn't a joke to me. I can't imagine being that cruel.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh wow, this is great. Haha, I was laughing the whole time while reading this since I would love to say this to all of my past exes. I know deep down when they come around me, they're not over me. This poem does have an unique form to it, which makes it more entertaining to read! Please keep writing more stuff like this :) You're a fantastic writer, so keep it up!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Kes]

I love this. I've, um, had issues with a couple of guys before where they've liked me and the feeling was not reciprocated and I recognise the notion of the constant lying, of the pretence and the annoyance and hurt it causes.
This portrays the feeling perfectly.
Great work!
K