Questionably Questioned...

Questionably Questioned...

A Poem by Silente
"

Chest-earner...

"
Questionably questioned by the quest-givers
I'm a chest-earner
and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...
I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...
No warlock circle to burn on my skin
I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...
I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe
Blows and throes...
I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...
A zoid, I am moist...
Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...
Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light
this time I'm "ite"...
Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...
Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...
Whole toll is folded...
A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket
I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...
Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...
Needing grit...?
 Oh, you wish...

© 2017 Silente



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.


Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Reviews

Your words flow like a river, smooth and natural. You are a master poet, and this is one of your best. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 1 Month Ago


I like this free version style when words and meaning are connected more naturally. Tone is quiet dark but don't put me down. More like floating above my reflection what i can see in your poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

6 Months Ago

Thanks, Writer...! Nice to hear such a reflective insight...
MARTIN IN DISORDER OF DCD

6 Months Ago

Yes i really enjoyed.
Bitter wine, i love this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading...!
Great selection of words! I managed to picture some scenes like a mini movie clip!

Great work, keep it up!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

8 Months Ago

What are movies, but words with sound built in, heh
Cecelia A. Green

6 Months Ago

I completely agree...
Bending twisting perceptions into a coherent magnum opus, nicely done. I think I like it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

8 Months Ago

Thank you, sir... I like your review, haha
Dream Weaver

8 Months Ago

You're quite welcome.. :)
Deep & powerful as usual 👍 it is what i call great job 👏

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

10 Months Ago

Thank you, Nourhan
You always use such exciting imagery. Great work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

10 Months Ago

Appreciated, Flame, again, thanks!
Nora

10 Months Ago

Most welcome 😊
Wow! This is amazing, mind blowing stuff!!!
''A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket'' is sublime. I am becoming a fan :D

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

10 Months Ago

To make the girl with the best musical tastes on the site a fan... Well... I could not be happier! T.. read more
This was a treat, really nice work!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

10 Months Ago

A treat of a review, thank you...!
Incredible! Encore!
It seemed as if you were communicating directly with me. This is somewhat different from your usual style.
Everything has been said.
Riveting and spellbinding!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Tazeen, it always humbles me to know people can find a common voice within my writing... .. read more

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1316 Views
46 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on June 14, 2017
Last Updated on June 14, 2017
Tags: Poetry, Dark, Life, Sad, adventure, death, depression, family, fantasy, fiction, hope, horror, love, magic, mystery, pain, poem, romance, story

Author

Silente
Silente

Denver, CO



About
When you have no words... Go find them! They get lost easily... (Seriously) Moving "Pure Rhymes" onto a free social platform... Come join like-minded individuals in an environment created by com.. more..

Writing
Plagiarism Plagiarism

A Poem by Silente



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Plagiarism Plagiarism

A Poem by Silente