Questionably Questioned...

Questionably Questioned...

A Poem by Silente
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Chest-earner...

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Questionably questioned by the quest-givers
I'm a chest-earner
and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...
I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...
No warlock circle to burn on my skin
I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...
I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe
Blows and throes...
I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...
A zoid, I am moist...
Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...
Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light
this time I'm "ite"...
Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...
Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...
Whole toll is folded...
A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket
I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...
Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...
Needing grit...?
 Oh, you wish...

© 2017 Silente



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Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.



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I like this free version style when words and meaning are connected more naturally. Tone is quiet dark but don't put me down. More like floating above my reflection what i can see in your poem.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks, Writer...! Nice to hear such a reflective insight...
WRITER-----------POET

2 Weeks Ago

Yes i really enjoyed.
Bitter wine, i love this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading...!
Great selection of words! I managed to picture some scenes like a mini movie clip!

Great work, keep it up!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

What are movies, but words with sound built in, heh
Cecelia A. Green

2 Weeks Ago

I completely agree...
Bending twisting perceptions into a coherent magnum opus, nicely done. I think I like it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

2 Months Ago

Thank you, sir... I like your review, haha
Dream Weaver

2 Months Ago

You're quite welcome.. :)
Deep & powerful as usual 👍 it is what i call great job 👏

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Nourhan
You always use such exciting imagery. Great work!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

Appreciated, Flame, again, thanks!
Nora

4 Months Ago

Most welcome 😊
Wow! This is amazing, mind blowing stuff!!!
''A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket'' is sublime. I am becoming a fan :D

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

To make the girl with the best musical tastes on the site a fan... Well... I could not be happier! T.. read more
This was a treat, really nice work!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

4 Months Ago

A treat of a review, thank you...!
Incredible! Encore!
It seemed as if you were communicating directly with me. This is somewhat different from your usual style.
Everything has been said.
Riveting and spellbinding!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

Thank you, Tazeen, it always humbles me to know people can find a common voice within my writing... .. read more
"Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe"- I rejoice at your mad talent my friend. Word-Master, Beat-Master, Rhyme-Master unchallenged. "I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss"...Rocket Man 4-Ever! Kudos!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

5 Months Ago

Hah, a rocket-man, eh... Thanks very much for the powerful ride of words, again, Annette... It is ve.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

You are the best S. Are you ok? Your profile comment talks about pain? Take good care.
Silente

5 Months Ago

I will be okey, thank you... Even sponges have over-saturation limits.

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Silente
Silente

Denver, CO



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