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Questionably Questioned...

Questionably Questioned...

A Poem by Silente
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Chest-earner...

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Questionably questioned by the quest-givers
I'm a chest-earner
and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...
I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...
No warlock circle to burn on my skin
I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...
I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe
Blows and throes...
I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...
A zoid, I am moist...
Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...
Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light
this time I'm "ite"...
Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...
Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...
Whole toll is folded...
A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket
I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...
Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...
Needing grit...?
 Oh, you wish...

© 2017 Silente



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Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
RolandDee

21 Minutes Ago

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read more



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Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

Posted 20 Minutes Ago


Your words flow like a river, smooth and natural. You are a master poet, and this is one of your best. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 4 Months Ago


I like this free version style when words and meaning are connected more naturally. Tone is quiet dark but don't put me down. More like floating above my reflection what i can see in your poem.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

9 Months Ago

Thanks, Writer...! Nice to hear such a reflective insight...
M W

9 Months Ago

Yes i really enjoyed.
Bitter wine, i love this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

9 Months Ago

Thank you for reading...!
Great selection of words! I managed to picture some scenes like a mini movie clip!

Great work, keep it up!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

What are movies, but words with sound built in, heh
Cecelia A. Green

9 Months Ago

I completely agree...
Bending twisting perceptions into a coherent magnum opus, nicely done. I think I like it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

11 Months Ago

Thank you, sir... I like your review, haha
Dream Weaver

11 Months Ago

You're quite welcome.. :)
Deep & powerful as usual 👍 it is what i call great job 👏

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Nourhan
You always use such exciting imagery. Great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Appreciated, Flame, again, thanks!
Nora

1 Year Ago

Most welcome 😊
Wow! This is amazing, mind blowing stuff!!!
''A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket'' is sublime. I am becoming a fan :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

To make the girl with the best musical tastes on the site a fan... Well... I could not be happier! T.. read more
This was a treat, really nice work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

A treat of a review, thank you...!

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Silente

Denver, CO



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