Cotton Anxious (Edited by YumnaKay)

Cotton Anxious (Edited by YumnaKay)

A Poem by Silente
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Focusing on locusts...

"
 I focus on
locust
hocus pocus
corpus 'n' oak'us ​- ​cloak'us
forest broken 'n' soakin'
evokin' mopin' ​; ​a rope'n elope
and slope'n​...​

​I'​m open like robes
​...​hose me down​...​
​...​hopes crown​...​
I'​m bound to sound
round my pound​,​
out of drowns​,​
so air hounds​ --​ abound​.​
I'​m loud in a cloud​,​
the ground amounts​
 to an ounce of mounds
-- and now​ --​

​I'​m bound
a bat outta hell
as​ -​ ​I​ fall and
sell myself short​ ...​ at bat​.​

​I'​m a rat​ ~​ so phat
I'​m cracked at the seams
​...​it se​e​ms​...​
my means are weaned
and lean, now sleep​
and dream​​
of eating ​​reams​.​

​T​he paper bling
that screams
as the mean king 
reaps ​-​ with ease​.​

​I'​m asleep and cream-filled​ 
​a donut​ ​still​ -​- 
​I​ will be​ --​- still​.​

​M​y will is filled
with obnoxious krill​,​
that kill and kill​...​
like the pill​​
​...oxycotin​...​
N​oxious​;​ ​I'​m
cotton anxious
forgotten angst, christ​;​

it​'​s drilled into my head
a bill of dead bits
lead to lead a message, Zed 
- in a bottle -
when will the mess begin​?​
I'​m throttled, a model citizen
and ​--- ​it ends​,​

no rest for trimmed
and
~ gobbled friends​.​

© 2017 Silente



Author's Note

Silente
Another superb edit by YumnaKay... If you have not already, check out her writing, it is talented work...! Thanks, and have a good one, everyone!

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You two have made me so smile :) truth I can feel Yumna's mind jumping here and there taking the lead for Your own mind to jump after, and I'm pretty sure You liked so much the freedom it gave You, I feel real joy through the whole piece, where nothing else matter, the whole world doesn't matter!
Thank You both!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Light, glad to share a smile



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Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Your words danced to perfect ending.
"no rest for trimmed
and
~ gobbled friends​.​
"
I enjoyed this poem my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


What a fun read. I wish I could write poetry like that.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Great rhymes, another fantastic piece. Not only is the rhyming fantastic, the whole flow of the piece is exquisite. It's not just easy to read, but fun, it's just a very enjoyable piece.
-Richard

Posted 7 Months Ago


I loved this one, my friend. It's light, fast-paced and it made me smile as the images rattled around in my head. I can visualize it as a fast, screaming, jabbing guitar lick over very heavy drums, with the lyrics driving the punters crazy as they each attribute different meanings to them. Thanks for the ride!
And Merry Christmas...


Posted 9 Months Ago


All the rhymes you make makes me laugh!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Laughter is the best medicine, thank you, heh
Crazy
Love it
Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

My pleasure, thank you
Lost in translation but mesmerised in the feelings.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

This one was a throw-away verse, and literally has ZERO "translation"... So I would concur with your.. read more
This was such a very fun poem to read and I didn't get lost in translation.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

I am glad! Thank you so much for appreciating...
The two of you are true master with words in each line, well done you guys an other great piece :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

1 Year Ago

Thanks, Joey
Joey Nizz

1 Year Ago

Your welcome
RolandDee

1 Month Ago

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail betw.. read more

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