Her name

hope you like it :)

Her name shines in my mind

Like a message in the sky,

Recalling the plenitude

Of her sweet, joyful self.

Letter by letter, her name

Dances in the finest manner,

Displaying the best combination

Our alphabet can produce.

Phoneme by phoneme, her name,

The greatest sound creates

And easily upstages and shames

The work of refined orchestras.

Her name I have in kind affection

Richer than gold, fairer than art,

I esteem for to its lovely call

She gently replies.

Author's Note

Just something I came up with. Actually, it's not dedicated to anyone in particular, it's more related to the feeling I get when I'm in love. This is how I usually feel about the name of the girls I fall in love with :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for love.
"Her name I have in kind affection
Richer than gold, fairer than art,
I esteem for to its lovely call
She gently replies."
When love overtake us. Sweet name of beloved make us needy and hopeful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lightsong]

I do LIKE it!!! joyously sweet, shines with the power of pure happiness, Yes! I know what You are speaking about, how the name would strikes inside like a loud fast, strong heartbeat! how Your heart will pound upppppp hearing, or seeing her name... how lovely wonderful is that sensation!

[Olivia]

really lovely.. i thoroughly enjoyed this :)

[Roe]

Great poem, so soft and elegant. Almost like a smooth melody drifting through my mind.

[TL Boehm]

a lovely, elegant and simply stated poem. Well done.

[Emrick]

Nice description of a name dwelling in the mind.

[Inda]

This is fantastic! such a tender, sweet feel to it. It is like a song itself.
Love it!

[Leslie Philibert]

A writer I know well, a great poet and a translator of the highest standard. This is excellent.

[Michael Perez]

I love the beauty of it, subtle simplicity combined with flowing language that conveys such a broad topic so masterfully. A truly wonderful read. Keep it up :P

[Briana O'Connor]

Very beautifully written. The passion is very well expressed and easily felt. The emphasis on the emotions that come with love is relatable. Nicely penned.