Was I Wrong

Was I Wrong

A Poem by Evelynn

Walking slowly down the street

Now I’m back on my own feet

Thinking back to my old life

Was I wrong to leave it all behind

Should I have stayed and made them proud

Was I wrong to scream and shout

Did I make a big mistake

By leaving that world, did I cause it to break

Was I wrong to want to leave that life 

Was I wrong to want a life all mine

Should I be sorry for living my dream

Do you want me to apologize for finally being me



© 2017 Evelynn



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The past isn't meant to be forgotten, rather, forgiven. I look at my past often because sometimes I can find that the past's meanings evolve through my different present troubles. And so in my past I find a pattern to apply to a future problem. Don't forget the past, use it properly and apply it. First, of course, you must forgive it. Just a bit of advice.


To the poem, short and sweet. I liked it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


I really enjoyed this poem. I think everyone goes through something like this at one point in their life.

Posted 5 Months Ago


You were right to leave.
"Should I be sorry for living my dream
Do you want me to apologize for finally being me"
I understand the above lines. All of us must seek our place and seek our dreams. Sometime we walk away and sometimes we must run away. I enjoyed this poem. Made the reader think. Thank you Evelynn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Months Ago


well penned Evelynn, enough to express that feeling. There were things we really regret that we did but never regret the things that made you happy.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Evelynn

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much
Nicely and thoughtfully described. If you can't be yourself and be true to yourself, then things will never work properly with other people.

Posted 7 Months Ago


So much truth is in this piece, and beauty as well! Loved it, no you were not wrong....☺

Posted 7 Months Ago


A nice piece. Short but emotional. The conflict between what we think is wrong and what we want.

Posted 7 Months Ago



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Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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