What has yet to come

What has yet to come

A Poem by GDmonster
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This dose not ryme at all but each line dose gose together in telling whats going on here.

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Broken glass imbedded in my feet

Thorns around my ankles

Castle gleaming in the moon light  

Night air chilled with fright

Engulfed in darkness

Unsure of the fate ahead

Growls of the unfair

Falling to the ground

Wishing you were there


© 2012 GDmonster



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Wow beautifully sinister. great 100%

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautifully chilling, painting a sinisterly stunning picture in my mind's eye. 100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very dark and sinister as others have said. I really liked this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GDM,

It's a great poem; deep in fantastic imagery. One thing I don't understand is: 'Falling to the ground.' How do growls fall to the ground? Growls dissipate in the air.

Thank you for requesting my review and sharing this interesting poem with us.

Cecil

Posted 6 Years Ago


Does it have a meaning? What significance does the castle have on the rest of the poem?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sinister and chilling. Gave me shivers! >.<

Awesome write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the poem. A lot of mystery and I like the description. Better to have a second person when darkness and fright is our emotion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brilliant, quite chilling yet, brilliant ^_^ then again I guess that's what makes it so

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was depressing, but amazing. I enjoyed the read though it was sad. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very good. This has a nice sinister chill to it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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