Make a Wish

Make a Wish

A Poem by Giullia King

There's something hauntingly beautiful about the way she carries herself. 
Even if her heart is shattered in a million pieces, 
she's always mindful of the type of energy she surrounds herself with. 
And I am forever jealous of her relationship with the starry sky. 
. . . 
You.  
Her deep dark eyes searched for his. 
"You take me to places, I've never known before. 
How did you know my favorite thing is star gazing?" She asked. 
"I knew it, simply by the way your eyes light up when the sun goes down. 
No one fancies the darkness as much as you do."  
"It's not darkness to me", she says with a frown on her face. 
"There's something magical about the stars in the velvety sky."  
"What's so magical about it?" He asks. 
"You can close your eyes and make a wish and it will come true."  
"Do you trust me?"
"Always," he says. 
As she reaches out her hand to him she says,
"Close your eyes, make a wish and think of me."  
He takes her hand, 
closes his eyes 
and makes his last wish.



© 2017 Giullia King



Author's Note

Giullia King
I hope you're not bored with my poems about stars. Enjoy. x

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This is absolutely stunning.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Lexi! :)
There is so much beauty in your words. You can tell when someone is special just by looking into their eyes. The trust between these two people was sweet and I could tell that the wish made at the end was an eternal one (perhaps love...?). Anyways, great job!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much for dropping by :) I'm so happy you liked this one! Exactly, the last wish was an .. read more
Elegant piece of poetry! I love following your unfolding of thoughts here. They are bright and rich. Lovely pen. R xo

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much, lovely Ray! xo
Always enamored by your work..I love the stars too

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Wow, thank you Jamey! Your words put a big smile on my face :)
So complete and yet has the ability to incite yet another poem.. I shall work on it right now..

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
A beautiful tale with a perfect ending. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to positive places and thoughts. Thank you Gullia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you, dear friend! :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend.
I enjoyed this piece alot, I'm glad you shared it, :) & if people are bored with your writing about stars tell em to eff off! haha just kidding, but I loved it ;)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Hahaha I will! :D Thank you so much for reading :) I'm so happy you liked it!
Kesha

9 Months Ago

You are so welcome :)
Lovely conversation....stars have always fascinated me...I used to make wish on shooting star every time I see one....and I would wait and watch the sky to find one....it's been a long time now I made or saw any shooting stars.... now gazing at stars feels like luxury....
Keep writing....

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Ria! I haven't seen a shooting star in such a long time now.
I also love looking at the stars. It was very well written. Thank you for sharing. ☺

Posted 9 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

It's magical! Thank you for reading :)
someone is looking up to someone in a more symbolic way than just the stars. it's just my take and i'm left curious. The poem is simply beautiful!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Giullia King

9 Months Ago

That is a lovely interpretation :) Thank you so much!

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