My World

My World

A Poem by Giullia King

"Stop thinking about it" He said.
"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.
"But it's the end of my world."




© 2017 Giullia King



Author's Note

Giullia King
Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

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some people take things more deeply to heart than others, which is why we must choose our actions and words carefully. deep. cool pic.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


It is good talent and thanks for sharing it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Giullia King

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading.
Guilla,
Much said in a short verse. No matter the relationship, the feelings don't always sing together.
Well done.
Richie b,


Posted 6 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Richie! :)
Who we are is not always understood. People play games, enhance or detract. Your words could be exchanged, man to woman, woman to man. They say the bad character not the sweet heart. How cynically profound a meaning.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Succinctly expresses the point of view of male and female very well. The somewhat callous boy and the sensitive girl play off each other and tell a complex story in a few well-written words. There is a great deal more to this interaction than is realized at first reading. If this is 'Sunday scribble' I'll take more.

Good write, Gullia.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giullia King

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Ted! Sorry for the delay here .)
well said,
commendable job

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giullia King

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Apoorva
Be kind? ;0

Hmm.....

It's somewhat sad and sweet. Seems to me the female has lost her purpose or the will to go on, whether metaphorically or literally.

Pretty good, Kingy!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giullia King

7 Months Ago

Yes, be kind.!
Thank you so much :)
The duality of perception - neatly and poetically explored in a few words - excellent!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giullia King

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :)
I've always been one who feels everything so deeply, and everything goes directly to my heart. That's the message this gives me, Gullia.

Your image is off the wall - incredible! Great thought process to compliment it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Giullia King

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your amazing words, Kelly! I've always been like that too! :)
The feeling of sadness comes out of this short poem. As well as nicely written. Well done! I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Giullia King

7 Months Ago

I'm happy you liked my poem, Paul :)

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