My World

My World

A Poem by Gullia King

"Stop thinking about it" He said.
"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.
"But it's the end of my world."




© 2017 Gullia King



Author's Note

Gullia King
Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

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Aw this is sad, it's heartbreaking, short & simple but yet so deep and meaningful! nicely written :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
Kesha

6 Months Ago

You're welcome, :)
ITs these very short precise poems that pack the most meaning.. I might bold the my though for just a teeny bit more punch..

"But it's the end of MY world.

Thank you for sharing...write on..

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

I made it a bit bigger :) Thank you for your suggestion.
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I love how you use dialogue in your poetry. So much power in that. You can tell a powerful little story in such little writing. That's talent dear! :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Your review put a big smile on my face :) Thank you for your kind words!
This touched me on a deeper level. Really, it does seem like the end of one's world when someone or something you hold dear goes missing...
The photo casts a mesmerizing effect (now that I see it clearly lol) ;)
Nicely penned, Gullia :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words, dear Yumna! I'm happy you liked this one :) Haha, I know you like the.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

You're welcome, Gullia! Always 😊💜
Simple&meaningful. You put the words right.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
Simple, yet Brilliant. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading! :)
very small but very touching I loved this...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

I'm happy you loved it!
This is very good! An enormous concept in a small space, which is always harder for me. My only suggestion would be not to repeat the word 'said' (unless you're purposely going for a 'he said, she said' statement. I think it carries more poetical weight to put, 'she responded', or 'she answered'. Tell me your thoughts :) Thank you for the read request! I.I.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Isabella :)
Isabella Ivy

6 Months Ago

You're most welcome :)
Such a powerful message in so few words ... I feel like the author's note summed it up nicely : )

- William Liston

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you, William :)
This is amazing! 😍
Thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gullia King

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading! :)

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Added on March 19, 2017
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Gullia King
Gullia King

New York, NY



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