Can you see

Can you see

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A poem about feelings and people making fun of me.

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Can you see
This is all about you and me.
My feelings are sweet,
Treat me some respect.
Everyday I heard people calling me gay,
By the way for those of you,
who think I'm gay, should suffer my pain.
That all I've to say, I'm not gay.
People have their own feelings.
Can you see
They've to suffer for this everyday.
It makes me sad,
When people get all mad.
Sometimes I wish I can make them all glad,
My feelings are lovable.
Can you see
I can make you more joyful.
If you could only believe in me,
Let it be peace,
For you and me.

© 2010 HorrorMaster



Author's Note

HorrorMaster
This is for the people who called me a fag back in high school.

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Intense Writing with a pretty sad background story. I can somehow relate with this poem (not the f*g-calling part, though). I totally understand how frustrating it feels when people judge just because, and you know that you can make them really happy if they just allow you to. This is definitely a wonderful poem, very meaningful and realistic.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 7 Years Ago


A great piece deeply expressing your feeling~ Nicely penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


yet again a good write but i feel this poem could be worked on a little better...



Posted 8 Years Ago


people still call me s**t like that... well thats bcuz im still in high school but nice write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww it was good. I understand people are calling me some things they shouldn't in school. It makes me feel bad. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is kinda funny.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice view of the past through forgiveness. Most of us have been picked on. It is extremely hard to forgive. Nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's so nice to read! I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


aw, i like the forgiveness, people can be jerks

Posted 8 Years Ago


People can be very mean, they shouldn't be. Your poem shows much kindness. Beautiful pen on this.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 5, 2010
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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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