Blood on the Page

Inspired by a comment by Infinity's Shadow...

 

I open my eyes

See you there

I try to scream

There's too much fear

Your words are soft

My body's in heat

I'll give into defeat

Offer my neck

Your breath

Your touch

My Death

Too much

scream in pain

Hindered by a moan...

You lick your lips

Life begins to slip

Lingering essence

Eyes open wide

I drink from your wrist

Body lusts

I cannot control

enthralling thrusts

Endless supply

I simply comply

Hands explore

Body explodes...

Satisfied sighs

Escape blood leaking lips

Drip drip drip

Reviews

[Moonblade]

I should stop reading your poems, because I think I'm getting addicted. My love for vampires is hindering my judgment of time and I might get a little too caught up reading your work and not spend enough time doing other things I should be doing. Keep it up.

By the way, I'll probably be reading and possibly reviewing all of the poems in this book.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on your vampire-contest win!

Sal

[Kory]

i love the essense of your poems...keeps me interested...love them all ...you have talent!

[Angelic Darkness]

Your words seem to offer a fast pace, like in a breathy
frenzy. At least that's what I felt. AD

[Kelsmiles]

Erotic but not in the usual sexual way.. i like this.

[Tiffany]

Ooo, creepy yet, soo cool. I've always looked for good vampire stuff, but all that comes is some freakish story (besides twilight) but this is good.

[J.benjamin Rose]

Honestly, generally I don't go out of my way to read vampire stuff but, now, I am rethinking my choisces.
I will, at the very least, be reading yours...all...of...them.
I really love this.
Makes me thirsty.
Makes me love the dark and the pleasure of danger.
Thank you for writing this and sharing with us all. I believe you have been underestimated and underrated in your classes.
You must continue to produce!!!
Only one question;should it not be "I simply comply" as YOU are the juice box and not the other way around??

[ShadowWolf]

Fear to ecstasy! This flows very well.

[Seriana]

Ooooh, I liked this! It almost sounds like lyrics to something that I can't put my finger on. I found it very easy to follow, almost had a "beat" to it as I read. Great write!

[brita]

Great write. I was very fast-paced and intense. I loved the imagery.