I really don't know

I really don't know

A Poem by Ishwar Grewal
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Falling in love is never easy, but it has a beauty of its own.

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Was it the day we met? Or was it the day we spoke? Was it meant to happen? Or was it the trap I fell for? Was it the charm of your eyes? Or was it your breathtaking smile? I really don't know....

There is poison in my bloody veins, With my blood flows your memories. The brain repulses everything except you, Shows flashes of nothing but you. The heart is puzzled when it sees you, Should it halt or beat fast? It doesn't know...

Is it dream or is it real? Is it the smile or the fierce eyes? Is it you or is it just me? Is it love or is it not? I really don't know.....


© 2016 Ishwar Grewal



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Your description sums it all up beautifully, but your poem unpacks it and puts it in all the right places, memorably.

“Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.” - Rumi.

This is how I felt reading your poem. Keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ishwar Grewal

1 Year Ago

O my God.... Thank you so so much.... That is the most beautiful thing anyone has said for this piec.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

Of course, you're most welcome! Glad to hear it motivates you to write more :)



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Your description sums it all up beautifully, but your poem unpacks it and puts it in all the right places, memorably.

“Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.” - Rumi.

This is how I felt reading your poem. Keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ishwar Grewal

1 Year Ago

O my God.... Thank you so so much.... That is the most beautiful thing anyone has said for this piec.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

1 Year Ago

Of course, you're most welcome! Glad to hear it motivates you to write more :)

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Added on December 28, 2016
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Tags: me, you, eyes, beat, heart, trap, smile, beauty, love

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Ishwar Grewal
Ishwar Grewal

chandigarh, India



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I do not write regularly but when i do, i put down all my feelings in the form of a poem from the bottom of my heart. When you do things from your soul, you feel a river moving in you, a joy.-RUMI more..

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