The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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I really enjoy this poem, I love the hyperbole of the last love poem, I love the importance it gives itself to say that the object of the speakers affection would be it, the absolute last. You have a lovely way with words, and I like your word placement. Well done!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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I really enjoy this poem, I love the hyperbole of the last love poem, I love the importance it gives itself to say that the object of the speakers affection would be it, the absolute last. You have a lovely way with words, and I like your word placement. Well done!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
dear Julie... the rain falling softly on the roses... the smooth feel of love when kisses like rain seal the fragrance of passion. Once loved in a garden will linger forever. truly, Pat

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
I so hope that love poems never stop, you have a beautiful poem. I hope I can keep writing love poems just as wonderful as this...


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
Ghost

8 Months Ago

You are welcome. I will read more soon
This poem is romantic with a sweet suspense that leaves the reader hanging and wondering.

WELL DONE

Posted 8 Months Ago


Love how nice to feel and be in . thanks for this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I'm sure it can't be the last--however, it is well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ahh!!,...your style my lady, so elegant and soft. Enjoyed reading this lovely piece. But this cannot be the last love poem, for I write them all the time☺️. Hope you are doing well, I sent you a read request some time ago, I'm sure you're a busy lady, but as you have time I would appreciate it. I always like your feedback,..take care and thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


:) ...the very last love poem ... for "you" the love and for the "rain" for hiding sad tears fro something that will be no more ..i love this a lot Ms J ...i think the theme and use of language is divine
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


So many songs that this reminds me of but it holds its own with all.

Posted 1 Year Ago


such classy writing dear friend.
I've got a lot to learn from you...

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on May 23, 2017
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Tags: Love, romance, rain, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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