The Last Love Poem

The Last Love Poem

A Poem by MsJewel
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"If this were the last love poem...."

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain


© 2017 MsJewel



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i like this...reminds me of the Lovin'
Spoonful..."you and me and rain on the roof, caught up in a summer shower, drying while it soaks the flowers"

a tribute to both...isn't it interesting...most people complain about the rain, and yet...there seems to be more romance during showers.
nicely laid out on the page, Julie
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie



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Love how nice to feel and be in . thanks for this poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


I'm sure it can't be the last--however, it is well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ahh!!,...your style my lady, so elegant and soft. Enjoyed reading this lovely piece. But this cannot be the last love poem, for I write them all the time☺️. Hope you are doing well, I sent you a read request some time ago, I'm sure you're a busy lady, but as you have time I would appreciate it. I always like your feedback,..take care and thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


:) ...the very last love poem ... for "you" the love and for the "rain" for hiding sad tears fro something that will be no more ..i love this a lot Ms J ...i think the theme and use of language is divine
E.

Posted 5 Months Ago


So many songs that this reminds me of but it holds its own with all.

Posted 5 Months Ago


such classy writing dear friend.
I've got a lot to learn from you...

Posted 5 Months Ago


this reminds me of an arabic poem, and its very nice. i loved the truth of love behind the words.
this is very well done :D

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie
Beautiful! A tribute to a love once been and the rain that watched it go. Love, like flowers, blossoms and fades. The rain gives life and washes clean. It hides and washes away the tears.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words Linda. :) Julie
it seems that love,rain and roses seem to fit each other,beautiful thoughts of love

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Each time I step into your poetic world you gift me with words of silk. Fluid, whispy and romantic.

Always a pleasure Julie. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

5 Months Ago

You are very sweet. Thank you. :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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