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I feel you

I feel you

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze








When the glistening sunlight showers its warmth

I feel you embracing me,

When I see a shooting star leaving its trail on the sky

I see you descending for me.

 

When the mighty stars’ light penetrates through the cloud

I feel you twinkling above,

When a fresh morning breeze teases me with its charm

I discern your good wishes for me.

 

When I pass a playground and hear a child’s laughter

Nostalgia of our time grips me,

When the magical droplets of rain shimmer and dance

I feel you smiling and blessing me!

 

 



© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze



Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
It is said that death can only touch the body and not the soul.

So this piece is penned in the memories of my late father.
Miss you, Papa!

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I can totally relate to it..the grief once that almost destroyed me as my father left, is now replaced with calmness of the mind on knowing that it was not the end..it was just a chain of even that will lead him to ensure a one step towards immortality..good piece

Posted 3 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Months Ago

Sorry to hear about your dad.
And thank you for the kind words.
Thanks for sharing this .sorry to hear about your father. Poems help us express our feelings so we can recover or at least begin to heal.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Months Ago

Yes they do.
Thank you for stopping by
He 'll always be there with u... nd his blessings would always be showered upon u forever

Posted 7 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Abhishek for your kind words.
People leave this world only to be with their beloved ones for ever. We feel them always around us everywhere..
Very nicely written feel....

Posted 10 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

10 Months Ago

Bala, thank you for your kind words.
Jyoti Ablaze
A lovely epitaph. Your heavenly connections were comforting. I know that death is unavoidable. Memories can come from and be pulled from so many places and given lovely form just as you have done here. Very moving! ....................Kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Indeed Kathy!
Thank you for your kind words.
Your words and expressions are at it is best! Truly, a lovely piece of work. I am sure wherever he is, he is looking at you and smiling. May he rest in peace and may his blessings help you live through your life. A beautiful life. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Fahmida!
This is a very wonderful piece. It a great tribute to your father. He would be proud of it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
lordofmadmen

1 Year Ago

No need to thank me it was my pleasure.
Very good tribute to your dad... I am sure he'd be proud of you... Very good words used... I liked the title along with your thoughts... was a pleasure reading...
Anindita : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Anindita.
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

you're welcome my dear....
That's beautiful and no doubt very accurate. I'm sure he is blessing you. Great poem. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you Gaurav!
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mou
Jyoti,I can feel the beat of every words here.When I read this, somewhere I find me at your place. Parents are the most precious gift that we ever achieved in our life time. no one in this universe has the ability to separate a Father from his daughter.I too just have the same believe like you. Your father will be proud to have such a wonderful daughter.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Mou. I knew you will understand. :)

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