Ruptured

Ruptured

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze



The day it shattered
I knew it mattered
More than I had let myself believe

The life went on
But I just mourned
The jolting loss of the obscure dream

Shimmering light
I see, twinkling bright
In the creeping darkness and space

Cuckoo had called
The birds all gone
Leaving me in the oblivion forever

The shattered pieces
Tease me with creases
In the memories of life I once knew

Grief and shame
Sleep in open grave
To keep an eye on the chameleon sky

Goodnight to you
Dreams that come true
Are smashed by wishes reared in malice


-©jyoti_ablaze

© 2016 Jyoti_Ablaze



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Jyoti_Ablaze
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Thanks for sharing this poem it is marvelous

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

Thank you.
The emotions are clear.
Captured your emotions, on the go writer.
Keep posting. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

5 Months Ago

Thank you Srijith.
Your pen is somehow, this is a bomb... keep up the good work

Posted 6 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

6 Months Ago

Thank you.
Glad you liked it.
Wishes reared in malice. There is a wisdom in those words I think many can learn from to try and prevent the grief and shame.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

6 Months Ago

Thank you Relic for reading my work and also for trying to get meaning in between the lines.
.. read more
Grief and shame
Sleep in open grave
I like these words and I like the message... Keep writing... Cause you serve different things everyday like life serve a different day everyday....

Posted 7 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Months Ago

Thank You Deepak.
This is a deep and very good write. You are really growing as a poet. Valentine

Posted 9 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words, ma'am.
A love the sense of loneliness you drew as an emotion while conveying a loss of sentiment...nicely done.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
T0TS

9 Months Ago

You are very welcome :)
I often am drawn to the image of shattering pieces too. I like how you say that they trease you. It feels as such.


Posted 10 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
The jolting loss of the obscure dream

The shattered pieces
Tease me with creases
In the memories of life I once knew

Goodnight to you
Dreams that come true
Are smashed by wishes reared in malice

Wow..just wow...I like your style



Posted 10 Months Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

10 Months Ago

Thank you, Jamey!
Glad you liked it.

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