A Wanton Seduction

oooh I have not written a POEM in so long ... man it feels good ..... :) HELLO WORLD !!

i have a secret 

one I have kept to myself 

for a long, long time

but now I find

I am 

bursting 

busting

billowing

I need to share 

this secret 

with 

YOU !

where do I start 

with the

lust?

desire?

the excitement 

right there 

at the base of my spine?

it’s true 

I have formed a rather 

desperate 

attraction

it has smothered 

my 

senses

sensibilty

my soul

this seduction

has gathered me up 

warmed me from

the inside out 

the outside in 

gives me shivers at the 

very thought of being 

within me

as I 

swallow 

gasp 

sigh 

when the pleasure 

reaches such an intensity 

I burst complete

relinquish control 

float in the ripples

wade in the luxury 

and sink 

yes sink 

into the arms of my truest love 

he goes by the name of 

LIFE

Reviews

[ANM]

Life it is the greatest pleasure sadly taken for granted too often! Loved this.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write! I was thinking man who is this person! haha awesome wording my friend I loved it :)

[Chirag Kumar]

A lovely twist in the end :D Unexpected. One of the best poems i have read ever :)

[Border]

Historic lines that deserves to etched in stone with molten gold- " gives me shivers at the very thought of being with me". The author is very comfortable with herself. She can never be alone, since she is her best friend, lover,philosopher and guide. Why go for company when one is comfortable with own company. Only those people are afraid of loneliness who find something missing in themselves. Any sorted out individual is complete by himself/herself.
I waited with bated breath for the heroine of the poem to have a physical union with her lover, but the end was the best twist in the tale.
All along the author was speaking about her zest, zeal, vim and vigour for LIFE.
The quality of writing reminds me of John Keats (1795-1821). I only hope that the talent of this author spreads far and wide and does not remain confined to the small family of Wirter's Cafe.

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:))) I want whatever you're having for dinner hahaha something in that "food" you're eating!

[Willard Wells]

Very beautiful perspective on life and I like your approach. You provided great imagery in this that had me envisioning many things. Great ending on life. Thanks

[MsJewel]

I love the twist at the end - something I wasn't expecting. A wonderful poem, quite inspiring - and as always a delight to read your words.

Julie

[Mitali Shah]

Full of suspense KWP. Your love for life is fantastic. Perfect blend of suspense for your readers. Loved it. Well penned. God bless :)

[Valentine]

WHEW< I was beginning to wonder why this wasn't under 'readers 18 +...Valentine

[Adam Adams]

You better know how to twist the whole erotica with emotions and faith. Very sensual starting but an extraordinary ending... with deepen words. Liked it!
Btw, if the wanton's you, i'd like to taste her seduction. sometime. someday. It's good to taste bimbo. Lol (Just teasing you.. Don't mind my words).