Bonfires

Bonfires

A Poem by KeeD
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(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

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Bonfires

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 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 


© 2013 KeeD



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KeeD

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I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
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KeeD

4 Years Ago

let me know if this works :3
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Yes!!



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The picture is wonderful. And as always, your poetry always draws me in and captures e in a swirl of emotions and shivers. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Amber Eve Surdam

4 Years Ago

I love hot teas. Especially when they serve it in restaurants. :) And hot dogs right now sound so aw.. read more
KeeD

4 Years Ago

Haha yeah I don't think I could light a fire in my house either, Still live with my mom she'd defini.. read more
Amber Eve Surdam

4 Years Ago

Same to you. :)
It suffices to say, that this poetry could be an inspiration for many writers to come.

" Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks" - If love was embers, these lines would keep it aglow in someone's heart forever....

Reading this passion play, I drifted off from the beautiful bonfire here, to a far-away, mystical place, I had not visited for a pretty long time. Thanks for the ride Keegan, just so romantic.

Posted 4 Years Ago


wow, amazing. So beautiful. So peaceful and just the imagery was amazing! Great piece, thank you for sharing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


you surely know how to entice your readers in every sense of the word...makes me wish i could experience the kind of romance that you've so beautifully portayed...makes us want more...wonderful

Posted 4 Years Ago


Damn Kee you are a very talented writer. Beautiful piece. It reads like some DEFTONES lyrics. Keep em coming.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Great again. I think you could do something really great with the smell of bonfires. They have such a distinct lingering scent. Something great could probably come of that. I usually don't pay much attention to poets on here, but your work gets me every time! Awesome!

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

Every time I get a story request I tend to brush it off cause I have limited patience when it comes .. read more
Carly

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Romantic and stupendous.. Beautiful imagery.

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, that's a lovely picture of yourself.
I love this peice the imagery and words just flow so well together, paints a picture. One can feel the emotion in this peice instead of it being just words on a page. You have created a beautiful love story in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this peice, great work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Katie :3
this could be smoke/ and fire lyrics, so much is in fabled flames, burning the desire to touch it's amble rearrangement dancing on water, earth and air, elementary to the music of it's crackle in heavenly of illuminate movement..nice piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

You sir are a genius :)
Blue foundation has a song named bonfire too!! and spectacular. . .nice poem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

yes they do :)

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Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

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